Feedback Please!!

[Angelus]

Hey guys,

I have a few songs on newgrounds, if you have some spare time, please check them out for me and let me know what you think! Thanks!!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/324808

That is my best one I think, you will see a little tab for related audio from me on that page to navigate to my other songs.

[mister2]

Wow, I like it. Sounds like it'll fit right in a RPG game. Don't know if that's what you were aiming for. Reminded me of the 16-Bit RPG days where a tune would be stuck in my head for days!

I think you can do better. Maybe add more instruments and stuff. But this is coming from a person that doesn't know squat about music so take it with a grain of salt. Keep up the good work!

[Angelus]

Thanks man,

I actually wrote this as a score for a collage movie awhile ago. The movie was never finished but at least I got a piece of music to show off for applying to score film now. You are in fact correct though, the main structure of that piece was originally intended for an RPG. I never finished the game, so I used the main idea of the song, for the one on the portal. Thanks for listening and providing feedback

Oh and guys, if you listen to this and don't like it, I'm not going to freak haha, I would like to hear what you think of some of that stuff even if you don't like it. Thanks!!

-Angelus

[SilverZero]

I know this will sound like I'm a total poser and all, but it reminds me of early Moby ambient stuff (which I love). The funny thing is, it's the "un-produced" sound that reminds me of that. Not a bad thing, it just doesn't sound like it's been wrung through some studio producer's mastering rig four times and polished up for a release on Columbia Records or something. Also reminds me of a super-chill piece I wrote a couple of years ago. Lost it in the one real hard drive crash of my life (still bitter - lost a lot of the first year's worth of photos of my daughter). Maybe I should pull up the patches and try to get back into it. . . . Like I need more projects.

[Angelus]

Thanks SilverZero,

I am sorry to hear you lost some of your music, that sucks. What instruments do you play? I played guitar for five years, then broke my left wrist in a terrible accident, so it doesn't bend anymore :'(

I am teaching myself piano now though, it's not really the same but fun none the less!!